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Latest Flash Reviews
You HAVE improved since even the last episode. I could not find any glitches (could be different for others) and I could not find any grammatical errors either. It looks like I have finally ran out of constructive criticism. Very good job and I look forward to the next episode.
J00 get 5/5 and 9/10 from me.
P.s. Also, nice usage of the music from Conker's Bad Fur Day. Really fit in nicely with that scene.
Author's Response:
Thank you DB. I hope this time i get to do the whole scene instead of spliting it up. I hope.
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"Your fighting animations have improved as well..."
(Continued from the review on part 1) Yes it seems you have improved quite nicely, especially during your action scenes. Still more grammatical and spelling errors, but making mistakes is the first step to improving right? Just make sure to proofread and look up/correct things that doesn't quite look right. The exposition and such was well done, as well as the music choice for each situation. With the way you're improving, I'll soon run out of criticism. Hehehe. Anyways, good work with this part and I look forward to the next episode.
j00 get 5/5 and 9/10 from me. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Man I will, I told you Episode 4 was gonna be epic lol. ^_^
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"Very good, you have improved."
You have really come far in your flash skills, and the story is getting better and better. Your grammar is nearly flawless...I say nearly seeing as how there are still some grammar mistakes here and there, but they aren't nearly as frequent as your first episode was. Though, if hitting the 16k frame limit really gets on you might I suggest asking Alvan Earthworm? I believe he has found a way to bypass that limit...other than that, good show. (Will give complete criticism after watching part 2.)
j00 get 5/5 and 9/10 from me. Keep doing what you do.
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Latest Audio Reviews
It has a soothing sensation as I listen to it. Would go great in a game that would be very relaxing, such as a laid-back RPG or a game like Animal Crossing/Harvest Moon. I just want to listen to this all day~~.
J00 get 5/5 and 9/10 from me.
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A C64 game you say? I might check it out...anyways this is a very good theme you given us. It sounds noble, like something a hero would have. Indeed, thine stands for virtue if thou have such a theme.
J00 get 5/5 and 9/10 from me.
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Its very good...but it feels like its missing something. I just can't put my finger on it but it just feels lacking.
J00 get 4/5 and 8/10 from me.
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