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You HAVE improved since even the last episode. I could not find any glitches (could be different for others) and I could not find any grammatical errors either. It looks like I have finally ran out of constructive criticism. Very good job and I look forward to the next episode.
J00 get 5/5 and 9/10 from me.
P.s. Also, nice usage of the music from Conker's Bad Fur Day. Really fit in nicely with that scene.
Author's Response:
Thank you DB. I hope this time i get to do the whole scene instead of spliting it up. I hope.
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"Your fighting animations have improved as well..."
(Continued from the review on part 1) Yes it seems you have improved quite nicely, especially during your action scenes. Still more grammatical and spelling errors, but making mistakes is the first step to improving right? Just make sure to proofread and look up/correct things that doesn't quite look right. The exposition and such was well done, as well as the music choice for each situation. With the way you're improving, I'll soon run out of criticism. Hehehe. Anyways, good work with this part and I look forward to the next episode.
j00 get 5/5 and 9/10 from me. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Man I will, I told you Episode 4 was gonna be epic lol. ^_^
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"Very good, you have improved."
You have really come far in your flash skills, and the story is getting better and better. Your grammar is nearly flawless...I say nearly seeing as how there are still some grammar mistakes here and there, but they aren't nearly as frequent as your first episode was. Though, if hitting the 16k frame limit really gets on you might I suggest asking Alvan Earthworm? I believe he has found a way to bypass that limit...other than that, good show. (Will give complete criticism after watching part 2.)
j00 get 5/5 and 9/10 from me. Keep doing what you do.
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"Its a good try seeing its your first."
Yes, though I could say for the later ones, as you improve, make it longer and allow us to choose different positions and camera angles as well as the ability to shag her in the anus, pussy, and/or mouth. Even different characters could be used, with varying degrees of features (such as boob size, age[maybe], and even furriness) to liven up the party. I do look forward to your later productions and we men pretty much like the same things...things getting boned. Though, I can't say all of us are dirty...I know I am. ;)
J00 get 4/5 and 7/10.
Author's Response:
if you waiting for my next maria game , ok then ... i will make a longer one whit detter graphic and i will do my best for satifing you......
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He has pretty much said everything that needs saying. Though I would like to add that the music was ok...other than that though...
J00 get 0/5 and 1/10 from me.
Author's Response:
As a child a group of dragons were kind enough to take me in. They raised me as one of their own.
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There is already an abundance of these on the portal so..."Nothing too new or interesting."
J00 get 2/5 and 4/10.
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""Uh, dude...that's not butter..." LOL"
I haven't laughed like that in a good while. Very nicely done.
j00 get 4/5 and 8/10.
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I'm gonna have to go with monstersam5 on this one. I've seen this around the internet and a few chans before it arrived here. I'm guessing you got it from the same place. Either way, I don't believe this is yours...still, its a good piece of work so I won't get too mad.
j00 get 3/5 and 5/10.
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"A pleasent little minisode."
Although you call it a preview, it seems like more of a miniature episode. Don't get me wrong, I like what you did. It gave just enough of a filler to satisfy us till the next episode. I do hope you will get it to us soon though...
J00 get 5/5 and 10/10.
Author's Response:
I will.
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"I'd thought there'd be more..."
Really, I thought there'd be more to the movie after leavin us hanging for 6 months. It is still really good though so I guess the next part is something to look forward too.
j00 get 4/5 and 8/10.
Author's Response:
thanks for watchin, this one was a direct continuation from the first. I didn't work on it for 6 straight months though. The third will be way better and have a point to it.us
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